Subeta Art Stuff

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Subeta Art Stuff

Post by Jax » 27 Jan 2010 01:27 am

This was originally meant to be my artist application but those closed XD Oh well, gives me time to fine tune this stuff, but in the mean time, I share with you guys

I did two pet revamps (mostly for style practice and to work on my animal drawings, which I haven't done in too long) and a few items

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Angelic Torrey Revamp - I decided to keep the pose, since I like it so much. The wings came out too close to the Montres, which bug me and I gotta fix

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Chibi Charlie revamp - I wanted to do a completely new pose, since I detest the old one XD; I also lightened the colours, which I noticed some pets do and liked a lot. Other then that, I'm not sure if he came out as chibi as I'd have liked him, and his foot is pretty off. (redlines would be insanely helpful on this pose if anyone wants to help me XD)

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And just some random items. I did make the other colours wearable but didn't add them for really no reason other then not feeling like it. The tea is my favorite but lost my favorite little detail in the resize....

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It's kiwi tea

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Yeah other then that crits are welcome so I can improve :3 What do you like, not like etcetc

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Re: Subeta Art Stuff

Post by Nogitsune » 27 Jan 2010 01:15 pm

The Angelic Torry looks cute. Perhaps a way to fix the wings might be to resize or reposition them? The Chibi Charlie looks neat too, though the whiskers do not match up and so look a bit odd to me.

Perhaps something like this? Image I shortened the whiskers to give it a younger look. I wasn't sure which foot you meant, but I did the one by copy, pasting, and mirroring the other. I'm not sure it actually looks any better, though.
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Re: Subeta Art Stuff

Post by AngharadTy » 27 Jan 2010 01:35 pm

The whiskers are supposed to be set wide, outside the mouth. But they are maybe uneven, a little. I love the grumpy face, though; I really like charlies as they could be (I owned an arid one for a while), but they just don't see enough love!

I love the kiwi tea tag! Maybe you could exaggerate the size so it shows up better in the smaller version. You could also make the cup "fuzzy" so it looks like the outside of a kiwi--just for laughs. ;D
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Re: Subeta Art Stuff

Post by Heilos » 27 Jan 2010 09:04 pm

I am extremely jealous of your item examples, especially that tea XD

I can see if I can do you a redline after class today c: there's a few spots I think could
be improved on with both pets but I definitely think your very close to the shading
style subeta has c: and I like the crisp-ness of the lines

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Re: Subeta Art Stuff

Post by Jax » 29 Jan 2010 03:11 am

Helios - Thanks so much that would be awesomely helpful :3 (oh and good luck to you too when they reopen, thank god we've got a lot of time, potentially XD)

Ty - Charlies do indeed need some more love, I might attempt another colour since I had loads of fun with the chibi one. I was thinking about doing some fuzziness, but I think maybe that would look too neopetsy, but it might be a cool idea for shading

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Re: Subeta Art Stuff

Post by Heilos » 30 Jan 2010 12:12 am

Ok sorry this took so long XD I did a redline for your torrey since most people
already touched on the charlie c:
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Basically what bothered me the most was parts of the face, the line of the mouth seemed
off as did the eye closest to us. I also reposed the left foot because the angle it's at now,
while similar to the currently posted angelic torrey, seems off or broken somehow, but you can
do what you want with that if you don't like my positioning XD

Also slightly tweaked the wings, but that was more of a personal preference lol.

Hope that helps a bit ^^ (thanks :3 yeah i'm gonna redo a lot of my items since I have the time afterall lol)

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Re: Subeta Art Stuff

Post by Jax » 30 Jan 2010 01:55 am

Oh my gosh thank you! I knew something looked off about the face but couldn't figure out what

Yay now I have something to work on this weekend :3

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